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Novice

Posted: Tue 28 Oct 2014, 11:03
by davidc
Opinions & any possible improvement suggestions for this one please!

Novice.jpg
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Canon 6D + Tamron 150-600 @ 600mm
iso 1250
f/6.3
1/500th sec

Re: Novice

Posted: Wed 29 Oct 2014, 16:40
by Paul Heester
Hi David

I intrigued by the boys gaze and the out of focus foreground. What is distracting me is the metal plate (?) at the bottom. Is he collecting food, distributing it or having his lunch? It raises questions that take me away from a good portrait. Perhaps a crop just above the plate would improve things?? Ive just used the Windows cropping tool on my PC at work and found a square crop works for me. Hope this helps :)